Elisabeth Elliot on Writing

A few notes to an inquirer about writing, from Elisabeth Elliot

You ask about writing. The best way to begin writing is to begin writing. One method is to start a journal. Not a diary which must be written in daily, but a plain, blank notebook in which you may write as much or as little as you choose, and only when you have something to say. I have kept journals since I was about sixteen. It is one way of forcing yourself to articulate lessons learned, prayers, experiences, descriptions of people, places, events.

The second very important exercise is to read books. Not just good books. Great ones. Observe what it is that makes them interesting. We find ourselves mirrored in great literature. We experience the shock of recognition. “That’s it! That’s exactly what I felt/thought/meant/wanted to say!” Great books are “an axe to the frozen sea within us,” Kafka said.

A few rules:
1. Write about something you know very well.
2. Don’t tell me, show me. In other words, don’t say “It was a beautiful house.” Describe the house so that I can see for myself that it’s beautiful. Don’t say “She was a nasty woman.” Describe her. Let me draw my own conclusions.
3. Tell it straight. Hemingway practiced eliminating adjectives. If you can do that and still make it interesting, your prose will be vigorous.
4. Aim at authenticity, never at style, originality, or “creativity.”
5. Make it simple.
6. Make it clear.
7. Learn to handle the English language. The best help for this is Strunk’s The Elements of Style, a perfect gem of a little book, indispensable for all of us.
8. Read what you’ve written out loud. How does it sound?
9. Avoid sentimentality. Study Matthew 27:28-36. Make a list of the active verbs. Is this a powerful scene? What makes it so?
10. Delete every word that has no real work to do.

A word about the process of gathering material. A writer’s “field” is the whole universe. Everywhere you go, everything you do or see, is the raw material. Make notes. As you find yourself thinking more and more about a particular subject, drop the notes into file folders labeled with broad topics. One of these days that folder may turn into a book, or, before you tackle a book, why not have a go at an article for your local paper, church paper, or a magazine?

One final word: don’t be a writer if you can get out of it! It’s a solitary job, sometimes a rather lonely one (who’s listening? you say), and it requires relentless self-discipline. The world is not waiting with baited breath for what you turn out. A writer has to be some kind of nut to stick with it. But if, like the psalmist, you say, “My heart was hot within me, while I was musing the fire burned,” then perhaps you will have to write.

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7 Comments

  1. Rachel
    Posted September 5, 2006 at 7:34 AM | Permalink

    Excellent advice, and well-written, as ever :) . I have to say that the internet has changed things slightly, though: with the advent of blogging, writing has lost much of its loneliness. Whether that’s good or bad remains to be seen, perhaps.

  2. Anonymous
    Posted September 5, 2006 at 2:52 PM | Permalink

    Wow this is the best advice that i heard about writing by far, it’s wonderful to finally find a rule guidebook on how to write a great essay or great article. Thanks for taking a lot of time into this, i will also study that verse you mentioned. Thanks again for posting this wonderful message! :) \

    Take care and May God bless you and keep you :)

    PTL *praise the Lord*

    Jane.

  3. Molly
    Posted September 5, 2006 at 7:03 PM | Permalink

    *squeals* Natalie! I found you :-)
    This is Molly from Cedarville summer studies.

  4. Rachel
    Posted September 5, 2006 at 10:05 PM | Permalink

    That’s some good advice, and it echoes much of what I’ve heard from my college English/Journalism professors.

    Personally, I have to work hard at #10. :-)

  5. Liz
    Posted September 6, 2006 at 8:54 AM | Permalink

    Thanks SO MUCH for posting this! I’m doing a creative writing curriculum this year in addition to studying The Elements of Style.
    Those tips were SO good and practical!
    Great advice for writing!

    God bless,
    ~Liz

  6. Elizabeth M
    Posted September 7, 2006 at 7:46 AM | Permalink

    So wonderful!!! I was just wishing for some good solid advice.

  7. Posted September 24, 2009 at 10:24 PM | Permalink

    so blessed by the advice..

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